I Luv Your Girl

Looks like I have found that reject song. Of course it is a dance song, but it still kinda sucks as a dance song. I mean the objectification in this song just sucks. I can’t believe we as people actually glorify songs like this. Such a disappointment. Maybe I just like the beat. I don’t even know why it is on my laptop or even on one of my CD’s. Damn, I do not like this song. I had an open mind but…. This is following the same ol 2000 era recipe for a hip hop song. Let’s talk about a female’s body and what I wanna do to it. WTF?! Follow me in the yellow. Without further adieu. I love your Girl by The Dream

The American Dream

And you know what I mean (WTF is the American Dream in your standard? Give me some type of hint…. Maybe it starts off shallow and gets better.

Radio Killa,
Should beat the track up like gorillas (I see this as a weak metaphor. )

[Verse 1]
Yeah,
We be up in a club. I see her do her thang
You might wanna rap, but she’ll make you sing. (And why will she make you sing? Because she looks that good? I gotta see this for myself. Never met a girl like this.)
See, I was on her and she was on him. (So You makin a sandwich in the middle of the floor)
She all up on my thang, got my thang on her hip.
She ATL pop, and don’t know how to act.
She left for one song, then came right back.
Grindin’ on me the rest of the night,
Her man start muggin’, he could see it in my eye. (This is where the usual phrase, your chick chose me comes in. Like It makes it seem like he’s takin some dudes property without her caring.

[Chorus]
Lil mama so hood (I love your girl)
Lil mama so fly (I love your girl)
Wife beater with the denim (I love your girl)
She keep them heels on high (I love your girl) –Does anyone know what Heels were initially for? I’ll post on this later. Stay tuned.
Man, look at shorty roll (I love your girl)
Man, look at shorty go (I love your girl)
I’m sorry I’ve got it in for your girlfriend.

Now, she runnin’ fingers through her hair,
He tryin to call her over there,
But she like, “Fuck that nigga!”.
She droppin’ down to the floor,
I’m like “Shorty you should go”,
But she like, “Fuck that nigga!”.
Call it envy,
I want her on me.
All up in my head,
Now she in my bed .( This is why dance music sucks. He’s trying to tell a story and he’s skipping important steps.

[Verse 2]
Me and lil shorty in the back, (This is what im talking about…. U just said she’s in your bed. Now ur just in the back? New day maybe? Bullshit.
Talkin’ ’bout dis, talkin’ ’bout dat. (People pay money to hear a rapper talk about dis and dat….. Naw mayne, tell us what you talked about, that’s the point of a story.
I got her on the ‘trone, she actin’ all bad. (Your game is wack/weak if you gotta liquor her up to get some… but it’s true it’s effective.
Girl chose me, don’t be mad. (Naw mayne… according to your story, she chose patrone.
Kelly told y’all “Don’t bring ‘em in the club”
The way she rock that, got the boy in love.
And I pray that y’all ain’t serious
‘Cause seriously she’s on my dick. (This steps we are missing are murderous. Like WTF?! Some shit just happen? What did you say above that has her on your dick? Dis? Dat? WTF?! It’s not money, u just getting on the scene.

[Chorus]
And, Lil mama so hood (I love your girl)
Lil mama so fly (I love your girl)
Wife beater with the denim (I love your girl)
She keep them heels on high (I love your girl)
Man, look at shorty roll (I love your girl)
Man, look at shorty go (I love your girl)
I’m sorry I’ve got it in for your girlfriend

Now, she runnin’ fingers through her hair,
He tryin to call her over there,
But she like, “F**k that nigga!”.
She droppin’ down to the floor,
I’m like “Shorty you should go”,
But she like, “F**k that nigga!”.
Call it envy,
I want her on me.
All up in my head,
Now she in my bed.

[Bridge]
(I’m The American Dream) Actually my dream is to be a lawyer. If you remember, people who came to The New world had a different dream.

Usually you won’t see me hate…On another dude. (WTF? I thought she was on your dick, but you gotta hate?
My heart got me up in here willing to separate you…From your boo. (WTF? Now I know you a liar. You can’t get her home if she still with her man. WEAK SAUCE!
But, she on me and I’m on her.
We walking out the club. Shorty what’s up? (I’m saying. Niggas are talking about keepin it 100 but… this shit doesn’t really happen. Keep it 100. Who really tries chattin a female up with “shorty”? I haven’t seen that shit work since I was in Middle school and went to Alabama for the summer.
Mmm, I want her in the worst way (And now he keeps it 100.
Plus, I just found out that it’s her birthday.

[Chorus]
Lil mama so hood (I love your girl)
Lil mama so fly (I love your girl)
Wife beater with the denim (I love your girl)
She keep them heels on high (I love your girl)
Man, look at shorty roll (I love your girl)
Man, look at shorty go (I love your girl)
I’m sorry I’ve got it in for your girlfriend.

Now, she runnin’ fingers through her hair,
He tryin to call her over there,
But she like, “F**k that nigga!”.
She droppin’ down to the floor,
I’m like “Shorty you should go”,
But she like, “F**k that nigga!”.
Call it envy,
I want her on me.
All up in my head,
Now she in my bed.

[Outro]
Part of me feels so bad, but
Ooo, not that bad.
Situation’s got you mad,
I would be too,
‘Cause damn she bad!
Damn she bad…

 

I’m saying though. The Beat was good. Your voice doesn’t even suck but. Lyrically, this shit sucked. 2 Bikes down. HipHop is about lyricism. Stop half steppin. Keep it 100 with something that was worked on.

~ by clownins on May 7, 2008.